The show was cute and entertaining, but not very deep.
What I didn't like
Depends on the future life intended. If it is to remain a fringe sketch, it’s fine. If there is to be a longer life, it needs to be more than an extended single joke.
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My overall impression
Full writeup at https://cahighways.org/wordpress/?p=15420
This was a cute and entertaining show, but doesn’t really have a life beyond Fringe. It is, essentially, an extended musical comedy sketch without significant depth. Donuts for dinner, as it were.