Review by anonymous
June 08, 2018What I liked
The use of space was good, especially the interiors, because they were unexpected.
The opening was great. Solid performances from all them Hollowfolk.
What I didn't like
If you tell me something, it needs to be valuable. Or else it just feels like you’re running me through something where I don’t matter. And ladies N gents—I matter. Makin it feel like it didn’t matter if I was there or not ain’t a way to make me feel like it’s immersive.
Also, fix the timing. However you have to. Stalls suck, especially when obvious as can be.
Also also also, help people be ready to fill holes if there IS stalls. Otherwise it becomes even more clear, right?
My overall impression
Look—it just doesn’t work. It COULD work. But it doesn’t. No way. No how.
It’s ambitious, like just about everyone says. But that’s ALL it had goin for it, as fars as I’m concerned. We were told to look for one person—but that never came up, so who cares? Some people were given info, but that never comes up or comes relevant, so who cares? The end seems determined to be the same no matter what, so nothing we do matters, so… you can guess the rest.
Yep. That’s my reaction to the whole damn thing. I wanted to care.
But I didn’t.
